Patreon! Need feedback.

Discussion in 'The Workshop' started by Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz, Apr 16, 2017.

  1. Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz

    Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz And Hell's comin' with me!

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    So I've finally got the Patreon page for Mallory Bash complete, but before I launch it I'm going to give you all the private link to view it and give me any kind of feedback you can. I'm looking for opinions on the rewards and on the introduction section of the page. Anything else is welcome, though.

    https://patreon.com/preview/65694f4cd879478082ef21cb2a5fc1f3
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  2. K.

    K. Sober

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    It looks very nice, and I have no major changes to suggest.

    Your intro comic only mentions the wacky fun stuff, and does not hint at the deeper parents storyline. I suppose that's deliberate, but it does run the risk of selling yourself a bit short.

    I think you could step up the distance from tier one to two -- ask for 3 or even 5 dollars for access to sketches. If you're up for it, you could add a tier higher up where you offer more communication -- a lot of creators let backers make suggestions, but that might be less well suited to your ongoing storyline. But you could offer chats with the artist once a month or so where people ask you questions, or something like that. Those are the rewards I'm most interested in on patreon, at least.
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  3. NAHTMMM

    NAHTMMM This Sunday AD

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    I like how the central column starts fun and simple and then shows your flashier artwork as one scrolls down.
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  4. Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz

    Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz And Hell's comin' with me!

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    It's LIVE!
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