The Velvet Embrace.

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  1. Sherlock Holmes

    Sherlock Holmes Resurrected

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    The Velvet Embrace.


    I sit here in the velvet embrace of yet another night. Some claim the night to be empty. I defy you to make that claim. For the night is full. Full of thought. It's the time to reflect, and turn inward. A time to let your mind expand beyond the daily confines of the routine mundane. For in the depth of night, there is no distractions. Nothing to pull your eye or ear with harsh reality. It is a time of fantasy for the soul. A time for flight. The flight of your inner passions. You darkest desires. Your deepest fears, and your greatest joys. Look upon your self and accept the embrace of the velveteen blanket of the night.
     
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    Double post!
     
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    It's quite evocative, but it seems like it can't decide if it wants to be a paragraph that needs more fleshing out, or poetry that needs a strucure of some sort.

    I would guess this was some free form, stream of consciousness stuff? Definitely some good materials to work with here though. Can't wait to see what you do with it! :)
     
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    It is. I just sit down and start writing. My more understandable stuff makes it to post. :lol: