Very short poem.

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  1. Sean the Puritan

    Sean the Puritan Endut! Hoch Hech!

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    So melts the snow,
    thus wane's winter's bliss

    Spring rains, like tears
    for a lover's lost kiss.
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  2. Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz

    Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz And Hell's comin' with me!

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    I has one too.

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    What once was here
    Has gone away
    And left me beaten
    Bleeding out
    No will to shout
    Like an old man in his rocking chair
    Vacant and lost
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  3. Amaris

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    Me also!
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    Twinkling bell,
    Twilight hour,
    gone in mist of gray,
    tumult sleep,
    counting sheep,
    no peace in where I lay.
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  5. Sean the Puritan

    Sean the Puritan Endut! Hoch Hech!

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    No idea what I was thinking when I wrote this one:

    Monday was when I knew it all,
    of course, this was a lie

    Tuesday a little wiser,
    for know much less did I

    Wednesday, yes I saw you,
    though I showed not my face nor eye

    Thursday on my knees I fell,
    not believing, asking why

    Friday I said to you farewell, my love
    for this evening I shall die
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