Vlad's Writings II: Lyrical Poems

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  1. Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz

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    The old thread kind of died, so I figured I'd just start another, and start with a recently finished one.

    The Land They Love
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    There was a time
    When the world was large
    And the grass collided
    With the sky
    The children played
    In the fields, they say
    I remember thinking
    That I'd never die
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    But now the days
    They run together
    And sleep, we pray
    To come soon
    We fight and fight
    Til the world is right
    From the sun's rise
    To the fall of the moon
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    -short instrumental-
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    Three days I gave them
    Three days they cried
    And the season fell hard, like the snow
    When we saw fire
    When we felt the ash
    From the clouds came the horsemen and crows
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    Bring me your tired
    Bring me your poor
    Bring me the hungry and weak
    I'll let them live on
    In the rags they have brought
    And wash the cold dirt from their feet
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    -short instrumental-
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    They come, oh
    From lands I've never known
    To the country so hollowed and true
    And they cry out to God
    For the strength to carry on
    While we trample the faith they once knew
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    Bring me your tired
    Bring me your poor
    Bring me the hungry and weak
    I'll let them live on
    In the rags they have brought
    And wash the cold dirt from their feet
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    -moderate instrumental-
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    Days go
    And more they grow weary
    The nights, oh
    In the streets on their beds
    They pray, oh
    Let the wind come so gently
    But the vicious cold
    Steals the heart from their heads
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    Bring me your tired
    Bring me your poor
    Bring me the hungry and weak
    I'll let them live on
    In the rags they have brought
    And wash the cold dirt from their feet
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    Oh, I could feel the rain hit me
    While I lay alone in my bed
    Can you feel the strength falling away
    The warmth from my furnas
    Is torching my soul
    Over the flames spread the breaking of day
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    Oh don't tell me it's action
    That dictates success
    Don't tell me it's all we can do
    It's all I can take
    I've felt the cold concrete wake
    The silence that screams from the blue
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    Bring me your tired, honey-
    Bring me your poor
    Bring me your hungry and weak
    You let them drag on
    In the rags they have brought
    And kick the cold dirt at their feet
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    God, bring me your tired
    Bring me your poor
    Bring me your hungry and weak
    I'll let them live on
    In the rags they have brought
    And wash the cold dirt from their feet
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    Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz And Hell's comin' with me!

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    Here's one that's finished, but I can't seem to find a title I like.

    (Untitled)

    Sleep in my eyes
    Gathering the colors and the borders
    That separate my world
    Placing them right where they belong
    Like puzzle pieces
    Mold together 'til what I see makes sense

    But though it looks right
    Is it still the ground that I feel below my feet
    Is it the air that blows the hair and
    Tickles my forehead

    The same I knew before bed...
    Am I where I left myself before I closed my eyes

    -short instrumental-

    The sights and sounds grow blurry
    As the years pile on
    My childhood grows distant
    So far have those before me gone
    Separated from their souls
    Replaced by cold, indifferent holes
    That absorb the light so kind
    And leave each day...
    Hungry and blind...

    The memories
    My life, my dreams, experience
    That holds together
    What was my character are lost
    In the translation
    Of education

    My weight once drifting
    Now drags my feet across the floor
    Find it hard just lifting
    My head to make it to the door
    Through thoughts go sifting
    To re-expose the core
    I fear by fifteen
    My eyes could see no more

    Than what's here...
    This crushing fear...

    (breakdown)

    I could sing, or I could drink
    I could change the way I think
    I might be one flew over the cuckoo's nest,
    Or leaps and bounds b'yond all the rest
    The days I spent in search of love,
    Or praying to the Lord above
    Are falling short before
    The years behind this door...

    (end breakdown)

    -moderate instrumental-

    (bridge)

    Take me back...
    To where the streets were wide...
    The sky was far...
    The world was large...
    The moon followed the car...
    When adventure reigned...
    When I couldn't stay angry...
    And the dish...ran away...
    With the spoon...

    (end bridge)

    I could sing, or I could drink
    I could change the way I think
    I might be one flew over the cuckoo's nest,
    Or leaps and bounds b'yond all the rest
    The days I spent in search of love,
    Or praying to the Lord above
    Are falling short before the years I live
    And all these things no God forgives

    I can't tell if it's all I know
    Or like my breath upon the car window
    Just when it's all so clear as day
    The rain will come and wash away
    What I swore was real
    And not a soul could steal

    Where the streets were wide
    Where the sky was far
    When the world was large
    And the moon followed the car
    Oh, when adventure reigned
    When I couldn't stay angry
    Will I remember soon...
    When the dish...ran away...
    With the spoon...
    -short outro-
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  3. Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz

    Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz And Hell's comin' with me!

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    A new one under the working title, "Hello Child."

    Hello Child

    Hello child
    What brings you here today
    I hear you traveled such a long, long way
    To see some sunrise, or a dancing firefly
    Just to find someone with a cancerous cry

    Life brought the heavy
    The mind that plays the fool
    Like the strings across your heart
    The Devil's only tool
    Crashing harder, the higher that you climb
    When your smile grows again, my friend
    Could you help me find mine

    Hello child
    Where have you gone
    And taken the light away

    -short instrumental-

    Hello child
    How do you get along
    With such a sad song, like the day is long
    And oh the tears they flow, much like the river rolls
    The gravel has no mercy upon those soles

    Life brought the heavy
    The mind that plays the fool
    Like the strings across your heart
    The Devil's only tool
    Crashing harder, the higher that you climb
    When your smile grows again, my friend
    Could you help me find mine

    Hello child
    How do you get along
    Your spirit broken
    Your spirit broken

    -moderate instrumental-

    Hello child
    Why must you go away
    Oh not one more day, could you dream to play
    I see you so cold and frail, such a sickly pale
    Please don't leave me alone, with my throwing bones

    Life brought the heavy
    The mind that plays the fool
    Like the strings across your heart
    The Devil's only tool
    Crashing harder, the higher that you climb
    When your smile grows again, my friend
    Could you help me find mine

    When your smile grows again, my friend
    Could you help me find mine

    When your love should live again, my friend
    Could you help me find mine

    -music descends-

    Goodbye child
    Where has your soul gone to
    Oh how I miss you
    Oh how I miss you
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    Finally, a new one. It sort of starts out a little slow, then builds until the end. It's a progressive song.


    ​Pigpen


    The wind turns hard today
    Could steal the ground from beneath you
    From a cool pink morning, into a fiery red night
    The sun feeling so kind
    Gave us a kiss from worlds away
    To say goodnight from a time we'd put out of our heads

    Booming voices
    Ancient forces​

    Rolling thunder talks
    This time you should have known
    He was before you when you begged for change
    With open arms so wide
    You could hear his old bones crack
    He swears to save, words echo in an empty nutshell

    Yellow powder
    Smell of sulfur

    Well in your crowds you feel safe
    But alone you fall to pieces
    With other voices your ignorance seems to fade
    It was the people that brought you
    The idea that the other who fought you
    No matter the truth, you might just shut 'em up

    You might just shut 'em up

    -moderate instrumental-

    He's a mad man in a pigpen

    He's a mad man in a pigpen

    -short instrumental-

    The earth opens to meet him
    And watch your smiles slowly turn
    The mouth of the sky screams with light
    You cling to your creations
    Your melted shoes begin to burn
    Soon swallowed by the empty night

    Soon swallowed by the empty night

    -short instrumental-

    But you wanna dive right in it
    Crawl up inside, up inside

    Have it your way
    Have it your way
    Scream for Hell in the face of God

    Up inside, up inside

    Well there's a fire down below
    In your head just hear it echo
    Nothing stronger than filthy hands
    Oh, now filthy hands

    Oh, God
    Oh, God
    Oh, God
    Cry to me now, cry to me now

    The heavy lift you up, now
    But the laughter drag you down
    The heavy lift you up, now
    But the laughter drag you down

    -moderate instrumental-

    Oh, God
    Cry to me now, cry to me now
    Oh, God
    Cry to me now, cry to me now
    Oh, God
    Cry to me now, cry to me now
    Oh, God...

    -short instrumental-

    Oh...

    No matter the truth...
    You gotta shut 'em up
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    New and Old
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    Thunder
    Pounding
    There's a crack reaching up
    Holes open
    Leaking
    Into the dark

    -short instrumental-

    A wall I was
    Steel beams and cold stone
    But the water
    That holds us up
    Is turning concrete to clay

    The call I waited for
    Called for action, not a wondering head
    Not a world to think over
    But a place I must build by hand
    So I think, think

    In the beginning I could swear it all made sense
    But with time comes worry
    A trouble that grows with all I find out of place
    Wind in the willows
    Some beauty they say is worth more than life
    But the wild words
    Come spilling out

    Come spilling out of you

    There's a flower grows
    But no eyes will find it
    No voice will define it

    Come spilling out

    -short instrumental-

    They say words give meaning
    So without them there can be none
    Some say things just happen
    So without us that beauty's gone
    If there's no one there
    To say what's been done is done
    Then you can't come crying
    When there's no life to be won

    When there's no daughters and no sons

    For the life of me, I can find no reason
    To look to the future with high ambition
    If by the end we all fall to pieces for the same fate
    Then give me a good reason for kindness or hate
    I can hear your belly echo with a hunger never full
    Love to grab at your brother's gold, but never hold to the golden rule

    Just hammer away with your old and rusted tools

    -moderate instrumental-

    (bridge)

    Why
    Should we work for good
    When we can make the bad
    Look just a little bit better
    If I want it
    I will take it from you
    Tell you it's alright, alright
    I got this thinking that's brand new

    It's different
    So it must be better
    Than anything that worked before
    Everything
    Needs fixing
    Your wisdom will crawl

    At our feet

    We have adventurous minds

    (end bridge)

    -long instrumental-

    New and old
    Can never live together
    New and old
    Can never work as one
    New and old
    Will never see forever
    New and old
    Will never see the Sun

    (scatting)

    There's a flower dies
    And as it goes the dark hides it...
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    Before The World

    Day in, day out
    Same old thoughts running through my head
    Such a crazy thing
    Such a crazy thing
    Clouded, though I get what's there
    Like a ghost screaming out
    Through the walls of an old house

    Sitting, waiting
    Watch the people pass
    Frowns and yawning mouths
    Through coughing, quiet words
    Could it be what I overheard
    Such a crazy thing
    Such a crazy thing

    Try to understand
    What's the problem here?
    Could it be that you and me
    Are not so different as it seems
    But when it turns out, with your head down
    You gotta win to disagree

    -short instrumental-

    I wonder by the hour
    How did we fall so far
    Some say it's been this way
    From the very start
    Still others shake their fists
    At the sky above
    Say there's nothing there
    But that's where all the blame ends up
    Oh

    Here comes the sun
    Rolling over my head
    Only minutes pass by
    Before the world goes dead
    Then nightfall comes
    And all the rivers run dry
    When there's nothing left of us
    Who will stand around and cry

    But why, son, why
    Do you look so far
    Such a silly boy
    Such a silly boy
    To think it matters at all
    Man, why can't you smile
    And let it all float by
    While the wheels are turning, Rome is burning
    And the fiddle bows cry

    -long instrumental-

    People searching for the world
    In each other's eyes
    When in time it seems that human dreams
    Drift away in darkened skies
    But how much faith can you place
    Beneath your aging shells
    Hiding outside in the crowd
    Where only time can tell

    Try to understand
    What's the problem here?
    Could it be that you and me
    Are not so different as it seems
    But when it turns out, with your head down
    You gotta win to disagree

    Here comes the sun
    Rolling over my head
    Only minutes pass by
    Before the world goes dead
    Then nightfall comes
    And all the rivers run dry
    When there's nothing left of us
    Who will stand around and cry

    But why, boy, why
    Must you look so far
    Such a crazy man
    Such a crazy man
    To think it matters at all
    Why can't you simply smile
    And let it all roll by
    While the wheels are turning, Rome is burning
    And the fiddle bows cry

    So silly, boy
    Why can't you face to wind
    Don't think about the future
    Til you meet your end
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    This was an assignment for my poetry class. We were charged with jamming as much imagery and metaphor as possible into a poem. This one is about my mother's childhood, when her father worked a second job taking care of a low-scale apartment building in Indianapolis. The only time she could see him as a child was when she made off to the building at night after school to visit him while he worked.


    The Gypsy Sprite

    A hallowed tree
    The little bees buzzing all around
    A gentle sprite pretends itself to be
    When work is done, and time for bed
    She twinkles away


    Over the bustling river
    Viciously illuminated fish full of eyes race by


    Past weasels and badgers
    Shouting and dying over bulls and bears
    Past the crooked snakes
    Throwing crooked smiles at rabbits and squirrels
    But for these, the sprite cares not


    Beneath the stars above the sky
    Who's noise ignored by the sound,
    The hum of light
    Below the robin's egg
    Plugging the blue wall
    Where an angry God has punched a hole in the sky
    His light beams through from the other side
    But for these, the sprite cares not


    To a small cave full of rats
    Some with wings and some that never move
    But filled so full
    Warm is this cave, unlike all the others
    From the cavern beams a light so bright
    And flows a smell so sweet


    It is the beekeeper
    Deep in the belly of the whale
    Hell's great hole
    Which as taken from the hive
    The golden glow of home
    And toils about to keep small creatures warm
    In a dark, forgotten corner of the forest


    It is he that the sprite has come to see
    The beloved thief of her night
    She takes what she can from the beekeeper
    And returns to the hive
    Enough honey to last 'til the light
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    Proscenium

    Wake up
    Creature, little girl
    But oh, what have you become
    And in this new world
    Forget, God, whatever was before

    Baby, little devil thing
    Wet ground and greasy dripping walls
    Show your face out here
    Come out and see the monsters
    Know now what it is you are

    Black wings flash across the sky
    Hear the horses raging
    Race on and feel the fire roll
    Back inside the room
    Cracks dig their claws into the light
    Oh, and the lover's eyes
    Burst above her smile

    Crawl...
    Crawl...
    Crawl across the yellow sand
    Crawl...
    Crawl...
    Crawl into the Devil's hands

    Shrouded, crowded hunters' den
    Crooked fingers reach out
    Twisted, wrapped around the land

    Whispers, laughter in the night
    Could they come from inside
    Oh, you in all the critters crawling by
    The words they know your mind
    Now that you've forgotten
    They are the leaves over the holes above the pyre

    Darling, you must open wide
    The raven comes to fill you 'til you die
    Little woman, let it all inside
    Barrel down and like it
    Just let the poison run it's course until the light

    Walk, child, walk across the stones
    My voice is calling
    The only joy that rings above the cries
    Oh, child, I will make you mine
    Feel me in your nightmares
    Hold on and let the water rise

    Crawl...
    Crawl...
    Crawl across the yellow sand
    Crawl...
    Crawl...
    Crawl into the Devil's hands

    Welcome, come upon the stair
    I've been waiting for a little thing
    Lie down, let your name return
    Rising from the page, here
    But my how the little never learn

    Little feet, standing at my door
    And with such small hands
    Hold on tightly to such a little soul
    Hold, child, I don't really mind
    Walk the line and fight me
    I've got everything and endless is my time

    Walk the line and fight me
    I've got everything and endless is my time