And now, it is complete. Here are all fourteen pages of the comic project. Some minor edits were made, but just some speech bubble resizing and rearrangement. I'll update the images a bit later.
I noticed the lettering in the word balloons was different sizes in different places. Probably want to standardize that unless it's for dramatic effect. Otherwise it's looking pretty damn sharp. Last two panels especially.
Originally, resizing the text for the speech bubbles was going to augment the distance of the character to the "camera." In some places, though, the character is a good distance from the camera, but the letters appear quite large, as when Ezra says, "I want a drink, dammit!" This, though, is a shouted line, so the text is still larger.