The FINISHED Scratch Comic Book: "Scratch, Chapter One: The Wake"

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  1. Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz

    Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz And Hell's comin' with me!

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    And now, it is complete. Here are all fourteen pages of the comic project.


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    Some minor edits were made, but just some speech bubble resizing and rearrangement. I'll update the images a bit later.
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  2. Lanzman

    Lanzman Vast, Cool and Unsympathetic Formerly Important

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    I noticed the lettering in the word balloons was different sizes in different places. Probably want to standardize that unless it's for dramatic effect. Otherwise it's looking pretty damn sharp. Last two panels especially.
  3. Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz

    Nocturne of Vladimir Jazz And Hell's comin' with me!

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    Originally, resizing the text for the speech bubbles was going to augment the distance of the character to the "camera." In some places, though, the character is a good distance from the camera, but the letters appear quite large, as when Ezra says, "I want a drink, dammit!" This, though, is a shouted line, so the text is still larger.