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  1. The Original Faceman

    The Original Faceman Lasagna Artist

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    I'll ask for a 12th grade re-write.
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    Sure, here is the last part of the story written at a 12th grade reading level:

    The townspeople were relieved and thanked John for his help. “You’re welcome,” John said. “But I didn’t do it alone. Tererun helped me. She wanted you to be safe.”

    The townspeople were silent for a moment, thinking about Tererun and what she had done for them. “Thank you, Tererun,” they said.

    And then they went home, safe from Steve2^4’s ghost.

    The people of the town were grateful to John for helping them to get rid of Steve2^4's ghost. They knew that Tererun would have been proud of him.
  2. The Original Faceman

    The Original Faceman Lasagna Artist

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    Now I asked it to use bigger words:

    Sure, here is the last part of the story written at a 12th grade reading level using bigger words:

    The populace was exhilarated and expressed their gratitude to John for his assistance. “You’re welcome,” John said. “But I didn’t do it alone. Tererun helped me. She desired for you to be safe.”

    The populace was silent for a moment, pondering Tererun and what she had done for them. “Thank you, Tererun,” they said.

    And then they went home, safe from Steve2^4’s specter.

    The inhabitants of the town were thankful to John for assisting them in getting rid of Steve2^4's specter. They knew that Tererun would have been proud of him.
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    And a JohnB cameo!!!