Quick Writing Question

Discussion in 'The Workshop' started by Lanzman, Jul 14, 2013.

  1. Lanzman

    Lanzman Vast, Cool and Unsympathetic Formerly Important

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    "They walked toward the mountain."

    "They walked towards the mountain."

    Which one is correct, and why?
  2. oldfella1962

    oldfella1962 the only real finish line

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    I would use "toward" in writing, use "towards" in speaking. Is that Kosher? I don't know, but it's what I do.
  3. garamet

    garamet "The whole world is watching."

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    "Towards" is British usage. You might have a British character use it when speaking, but "toward" is for American usage.

    Ditto "regards" and "regard." ;)
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  4. Paladin

    Paladin Overjoyed Man of Liberty

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    Odd little differences in prepositions/articles I've noted...

    Yanks: "He's in the hospital."
    Brits/Canadians/Aussies: "He's in hospital."

    Yanks: "His car is different from mine."
    Aussies: "His car is different to mine."

    Bonus round (points for German clarity):
    In English we take aspirin for a headache.
    In German, they take aspirin against (gegen) a headache.
    Much more logical, methinks.
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  5. Lanzman

    Lanzman Vast, Cool and Unsympathetic Formerly Important

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    I accept (and will take credit for) the benefit of your experience and knowledge. Kinda what I thought but wanted some other opinions on it.
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  6. Paladin

    Paladin Overjoyed Man of Liberty

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    Funny thing about "toward" and "towards:" although I can usually identify the correct word by speaking the sentence both ways out loud, it sounded right to me either way.

    I guess the English and American versions have both sorta seeped into my brain.
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  7. oldfella1962

    oldfella1962 the only real finish line

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    It does make sense. Why we would we take something that gives us a headache? Somebody should have thought that through when they invented English.
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    John Castle Banned Writer

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    Let's not hold it for them.
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    Rimjob Bob Classy Fellow

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    Scott Hamilton Robert E Ron Paul Lee Straight Awesome

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    So is the answer that both could be correct?
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  11. Clyde

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    George Carlin agrees! "Nobody takes a shit..."
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    NeonMosfet Probably a Dual

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    Wow. I'm a real American
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  13. oldfella1962

    oldfella1962 the only real finish line

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    As a strictly hung restaurant customer I must say this thread is all the fangle and then some!
  14. Lanzman

    Lanzman Vast, Cool and Unsympathetic Formerly Important

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    Hey. I asked a perfectly cromulent question and Garamet's answer embiggens us all.
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  15. Paladin

    Paladin Overjoyed Man of Liberty

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    A friend of mine slyly used "cromulent" in a discussion in a college English class. No one--including the teacher--challenged him on it.
  16. Lanzman

    Lanzman Vast, Cool and Unsympathetic Formerly Important

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    IIRC, "cromulent" and "embiggen" are in Webster's now. I know I see "click to embiggen" all over the web.
  17. Paladin

    Paladin Overjoyed Man of Liberty

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    I'm ordinarily not a big fan of neologisms unless they're clever or communicate a concept more clearly than an existing word.

    "Embiggen" really works for me. In common use now, it's just a substitute for "enlarge" (the AICN website often invites users to "click to embiggen" an image), but "embiggen" seems more vivid. In the Simpson's original usage of the word--Jebediah Springfield's assertion that "a bold spirit embiggens a man"--it has almost the same meaning, but the subtle difference from "enlarges" is that the change isn't physical; it's to make oneself greater in some personal sense. I like that.

    And I think it's fitting that "cromulent" has become official. Its standard meaning is "fine, acceptable, normal, authentic," but I think this misses its ironic usage: to say something is cromulent is to seem to describe it as fine, good, etc., but the fact that the word cromulent is bogus means that it isn't. A: "I think the moon is made of green cheese." B: "That's a perfectly cromulent opinion." So, in a weird way, "cromulent" means both fine/good/okay and not fine/not good/not okay because it's got built-in irony.

    I'm also gradually coming around to the idea of making adjectives by taking a noun and adding a "-y" on the end. For example (a poor one I made up):
    A: "What do you think of my new flying machine?"
    B: "It looks sorta helicopter-y."
    I wouldn't necessarily recommend this for a college term paper, but in normal dialog? Or for humorous effect? I kinda like it. It also occurs to me we've been doing this for years with "-ish."
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